A long time ago, In a world far far away, there were three pigs. They lived with their mum in a crowded house. One day their mum said ” You fat pigs are getting too old to live with me, Pack your belongings and find somewhere else to live. So they did, they packed up their clothes and took some potato chips, and out the door they went. The first pig was the laziest in the three. He wanted to build a quick house. He wasn’t bothered by how his home would look like, he just wanted a roof over his head and a couch to sit on. So he gathered straw. It took him 1 week to make his house. The second pig wanted an average house . He didn’t want to rush his house unlike his little brother. But he didn’t want to work on his house for months. He gathered timber, and straw to connect the wood. It took him 5 weeks to build his house. The third pig was really hard working. She built her house out of clay bricks. She used mortar to weld each brick together. She wanted a house that would last her for a long time. It took her 2 months for her house to be finished. One day a wolf comes strolling down a path. Sniff sniff “I smell pork waiting to be eaten” he grinned sinisterly. So he walked to the flimsy straw house, and said “Little pig little pig let me in” “not by the hair my chinny chin chin”, so he huffed and he puffed and he blew the first house down. So the first little pig ran to his older brother. “Let me in, a big bad wolf is chasing me,” the young pig cried. Come in, he said. “Little pigs little pigs let me in” not by the hairs of our chinny chin chins” so he huffed and he puffed and he blew the second house down! So both of the pigs ran to the third house, “let us in, a big bad wolf is chasing us! “Come in,'' she said. “Little pigs little pigs let me in” “not by the hairs of our chinny chin chin” so he huffed and he puffed and the brick house did not fall down, he tried again he huffed and he puffed and the house did not fall down. The big bad wolf almost gave up, then an idea came to his head. He thought he could climb up on top of the roof and jump down through the chimney. But the little pigs were smart, they lit a fire in the chimney so the wolf would get burned if he decided to come down there, and not surprisingly enough he fell down the chimney. The big sister taught the little brothers how to make brick houses and that hard work always pays off.
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Hey there, Bitner here. I really like your story because it has describing words and I like how you started the story with "A long time ago" What would you build your house out of?
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I would build my house out of steel. How about you?
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ReplyDeletethis is some good writing I love all the detail you've put into this piece of writing. It was funny how the mum said you fat pigs are getting to old to live with me. if you had to build your own house would you use wood bricks or hay??
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I think I would choose the obvious option,brick. How about you?
DeleteKia Ora Jiraiya, my name is Milo from room 25. I really liked this blog post because you had descriptive writing and had some tricky words in your story. I also liked how you said how long it took to make the houses so people can visualize how unsteady the houses were. I remember when I made this story on My Blog. Maybe next time you could add some photo's in. If you were one of the pigs, what would you make your house out of? Anyways, thank you for sharing your blog, blog ya later! P.s, check out my My Blog Bye!!!
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